Shows potential, but your moral shouldn't be slammed like that, they work better if you have to figure them out for yourself.
Also - the action seemed like a really bad serial drama fight scene where the people are waiting for each other to act... try to find ways for the hero to do well other than the enemies incompetence.
I usually don't like sprite movies but this one kept me watching somehow. Would have been better with voice overs and that wolverine slice effect could have been much better. Generally entertaining though - can't wait to see what you make as your skills improve!
Too short, but I guess I should watch the earlier ones now this one has impressed me. Also: the voices were a little too quiet. Good stuff, nice effects.
Why didnt you credit the audio?
Good flash, but the soundtrack was from Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless mind (Bookstore composed by Jon Brion)
.I would have respected this more if you would have credited it (instead of crediting yourself)
It was too short also.
Sorry, but now I credit the sound to jon brion... thanks for the advice!!
Did I just dream that?
FFS man that was crazy... I dont understand... Help... Please... My life has just been turned upside down watching that, What's going on? It's an eyeball comin to get me... aargh... what? I dont understand... it looked so happy in the intro... whats going on? nothing seems real anymore...
Stop using dynamic text fields where you can use static ones, and go tear your eyeball out and see what adventures it has for storyline inspiration before submitting this to us.
Made me laugh...
Too short, but you know that already
When it's longer I guess it'll be awesome, the animation seems a little 'jerky' as well. Ignore the people who think anyone who draws in that style is copying David Firth (salad fingers , burnt face man etc), that style was around long before he started animating, so good job!
Laughed so hard, I've been laughing for about 10 minutes and just got it together to write this :D
I've never seen a starwars film, but we all know those scenes exist, and your parodies were hilarious, and the animation, drawings and sound were all great too!
Hillarious is the word that puts a smile on my face :D
Stylish... but pants.
It was like one of those catwalk dresses, it looks pretty but its completely pointless.
If the drawing was yours the drawing was pretty awesome, and this flash does you no justice...
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