Very Haunting
The scene outside was a little bland... There was nothing happening for ages and although I'm aware this can create an atmosphere - it didn't work for me in this case, it was way too long. The graphics inside looked much better than the outdoor graphics, so make sure thats sorted in the finished article (also, maybe not give away the characters name with the James: bit... keep him a mystery or the entire atmosphere goes down the pan) good stuff tho, I can't wait to see the finished thing!